User blog comment:KatDWolf/Idea for Hetalia Children's Story/@comment-1826286-20100918031015/@comment-2241574-20100918032814

Ah, thanks for the clarifications^^ Considering the age group, I'd say that your idea is appropriate.

My advice: be careful not to make sentence structures too complicated; try to keep it short and to the point. The children at that age are just beginning to explore the wonderful world of reading, so you don't want to discourage them. Also, I'd say follow NiyoRiyo's suggestion and use human names (though I believe the story would work if you use country names)

But, remember that this is your story, so you get to decide what you want. Take what I wrote with a grain of salt and use only what you find to be helpful.

Good luck with your writing! : )